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Band 6+: Part 3 1. Do you think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged?

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Of course, I think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged. If they receive encouragement from their friends, it will inspire them to work hard, improve their confidence, and motivate them to pursue their dreams.

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Of course I think children are more like to accept their goals if they are encouraged because if they receive encouragement from their friends, their friends and kids and kids, it will inspire them to work hard and improve their confidence and they will work hard to accept their dream.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 4

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanation and examples to support the claim. Consider exploring different types of encouragement and their impact, and perhaps mentioning potential counterarguments or exceptions.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but there is some repetition and slight rambling. The phrase 'friends, their friends and kids and kids' is unclear and detracts from the fluency. Focus on concise expression and avoid unnecessary repetition in future responses.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'accept their goals' are not quite precise; 'achieve' or 'reach' would be better. Try to incorporate more precise and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as 'more like to accept'. The sentence structure is also somewhat simple. Work on improving grammatical accuracy and expanding sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical competence.

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