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Band 7+: Part 3 1. Do you think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged?

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I think being encouraged is a very powerful tool for achieving any goals for any person. This is also true for children, who are likely to achieve their goals. There is always a person behind them who has motivated or encouraged them in their professional life, academic life, or anything else. That's why I believe that encouragement is a significant tool for human success.

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I think being encouraged is a very powerful tool in case of achieving any goals to any human person. And this is also true for any children who are likely to achieve their goal. There are always a person behind them who has motivated or encouraged him in their professional life or academic life or anything. So that’s why I believe that encouragement is a big tool to any human success.

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goals: 2

person: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. However, it could benefit from more specific examples and a deeper exploration of the different types of encouragement and their impact on goal achievement. Consider expanding on the various ways encouragement can manifest and how it might differ across various contexts.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slightly unnatural phrasing ('in case of achieving any goals to any human person') detract from fluency. Consider rephrasing for conciseness and natural flow.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. While 'powerful tool' is used effectively, more sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response. Consider synonyms for 'tool' and 'motivated' to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors ('a person behind them who has motivated or encouraged him'). The use of 'him' is inconsistent with the plural 'children'. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more varied sentence structures would improve the score.

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