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Band 5+: Part 3 1. Do you think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged?

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I think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged. In today's society, children are often motivated to achieve. A supportive environment plays a big role. When children feel happy and supported, they gain confidence in themselves.

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Through individual for children nowadays who are living in a society proly they have motivation for the achievement just usually a soc place preing. So let’say the big when they work down, when children have they happy, they will confident in theirselves.

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The student attempts to answer the question but struggles to express their ideas clearly. They mention the importance of motivation and a supportive environment, but the answer lacks clarity and coherence. The student could benefit from practicing expressing their ideas more concisely and using more specific examples.

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