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Band 6+: Should parents always help Their children with everything

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No, this can make children too dependent. It should be a gradual process. Parents can start by showing how it's done and letting them do it completely on their own. Children should learn that they can do things on their own as they grow up.

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No. This can make, uh, children too dependent. It should be a gradual process. Parents can start by showing how it’s done and letting, uh, them do it completely on their own. Children should learn that they have two things on their own as they grow up.

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should: 2

their: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant and addresses the question directly. The student provides a clear opinion and supports it with a logical explanation. However, the answer could be more developed by providing specific examples of how parents can help their children gradually become independent. For example, the student could mention helping with homework, chores, or making decisions. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is delivered with a good pace and natural flow. There are a few minor hesitations, indicated by "uh," but they do not significantly disrupt the coherence of the answer. The student uses appropriate cohesive devices, such as "and" and "as they grow up," to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary that is appropriate for the topic. The vocabulary is generally accurate and precise, but there is room for improvement in terms of using more sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of "too dependent," the student could use "overly reliant." The student also uses the phrase "do things on their own" twice, which could be replaced with a synonym like "become self-sufficient" for greater variety.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates good grammatical control. There are no major errors in grammar, but there are a few minor inaccuracies. For example, the sentence "Children should learn that they have two things on their own as they grow up" is grammatically incorrect. The student should have said "Children should learn that they can do things on their own as they grow up." Overall, the grammar is accurate and the student uses a variety of grammatical structures effectively.

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