Band 6+: Should schools spend most money on music, sport or school trips?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the prompt but could benefit from further elaboration and justification of the chosen area (sport). While acknowledging alternative viewpoints adds nuance, expanding on the benefits of sports in schools would strengthen the argument. Consider providing specific examples or reasons to support the claim that sports are more important than music or school trips.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('for our life, for our life'). The structure is basic. To improve, try to expand on your points with examples or further explanations to create a more developed and fluent response. Practice using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is quite limited and basic. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to education, sports, music, and school trips. For example, instead of just saying 'important,' you could use words like 'essential,' 'crucial,' or 'beneficial.' Also, try to use more specific vocabulary related to the topic.

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'eat because music isn't important' and 'school trips also isn't important.' The conditional sentence 'if I was a head teacher' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'if I were a head teacher.' To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately. Practice using conditional sentences, relative clauses, and different verb tenses. Review basic grammar rules and try to incorporate more complex sentence structures into your speech.