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Band 7+: What disadvantages does renewable energy have?

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Yes, there are some drawbacks. First, it is very expensive to invest in solar panels or wind devices; they cost a lot of money. It is also unreliable because it depends on the weather. For example, if there is no wind or if it is a cloudy day, we cannot get enough electricity. In Myanmar, we also face this problem, especially during the dry season when our rivers have less water for hydropower or to generate electricity.

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yes there are some drawbacks first it is very expensive to bid at the beginning by solar panels or wind advice cost a lot of money. So I can… It is unreliable because it depends on the weather. For example, if there is no wind or if it is a cloudy day, we cannot get enough electricity. In Myanmar, we also face this problem, especially during the dry season when our rivers have less water for hydropower or to generate electricity.

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Task Response

The answer addresses the disadvantages of renewable energy with relevant points such as high initial costs and weather dependency. Providing a specific example from Myanmar enhances the response. To further improve, consider elaborating on the potential solutions to these disadvantages or discussing the long-term benefits that might outweigh the initial costs and reliability issues.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and well-organized, presenting clear disadvantages of renewable energy. There's a brief hesitation ('So I can...') which slightly affects fluency. To improve, practice speaking more continuously and avoid unnecessary pauses. Using discourse markers more effectively could also enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for discussing the topic, using terms like 'solar panels,' 'wind devices,' 'unreliable,' and 'hydropower.' To enhance lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and varied vocabulary related to renewable energy and its challenges. For example, instead of 'wind devices,' you could say 'wind turbines,' and instead of 'cost a lot of money,' you could use 'require significant capital investment.'

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