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Band 7+: What kind of rewards are important at work?

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Well, in my point of view, both rewards are crucial for a worker: monetary rewards and appreciation. They not only give them confidence to work smartly but also provide an incentive to work harder. For example, when a worker works hard for his company and receives extra money alongside appreciation from his boss, it gives him an incentive to work even harder. So, I think both are important.

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Well, in my point of view both rewards are crucial for a worker, monetary reward and appreciation. As it not only give them confident to work smartly but also give them incentive to work harder. For example, when a worker work hard for his company and get extra money alongside appreciation from his boss, it will just give him incentive to work more harder. So I think both are important.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

work: 3

rewards: 2

appreciation: 2

incentive: 2

harder: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The answer is quite good and covers the main aspects of the question. However, it could be improved by providing more specific examples and elaborating on the different types of rewards and their impact on employee motivation and productivity. Consider exploring the nuances of non-monetary rewards, such as recognition, opportunities for professional development, and a positive work environment.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The ideas flow logically. Minor repetition ('work harder' and 'more harder') could be avoided for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'crucial,' 'incentive,' and 'appreciation' are used appropriately. However, expanding the range of vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms for 'important' and 'hard'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors ('give them confident' should be 'give them confidence,' 'work more harder' should be 'work harder' or 'work even harder'). The sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex grammatical structures would enhance the score.

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