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Band 7+: What problems can people have when they try new activities for the first time?

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To be honest, I've never thought about this before, but I think people may face various types of challenges when they try new activities. For example, they may not have enough experience. They may lose their temper when they encounter difficulties, and on the other hand, if they fail the first time, they may lose their self-confidence and mental well-being. This may impact their confidence in pursuing future goals and prevent them from experiencing new things again.

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To be honest, I’ve never thought about this before, but I think people may face various types of challenges when they do new activities, for example, because they don’t have enough experience. They may lose their temper when they encounter difficulties, and on the other hand, if they fail at the first time, they may lose their self-confidence and mental well-being, and it may impact on their confidence to seek their future goals and prevent them from experiencing new things another time.

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