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Band 6+: what things can make people fell asleep?

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I think one of the most popular methods is calm music because while you're listening to it, the quiet music makes you feel calm, and you just start feeling that you want to sleep. The second is that many personal problems can encourage people to sleep more. Rarely do people know that many personal issues can lead to this. Especially businessmen, who often have their problems, tend to sleep more, which can be a factor in this.

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I think one of the most popular methods is the calm music because while you’re listening them the quiet music makes you feel calm and you just start feeling that you wanted to sleep. The second is I think I think that your problem your personal problems rarely do people know that many problems many personal problems can make people encouraged to sleep more. Especially the businessmen that often have their problems, they love, they like sleeping more which can be fact of this.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 3

sleep: 3

music: 2

personal: 2

problems: 2

people: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant information. The ideas are generally well-explained, although some points could be expanded upon for greater depth. Consider providing more specific examples or elaborating on the connections between the factors mentioned and the feeling of sleepiness.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('I think I think'). The organization of ideas is present but could be smoother. Try to minimize repetitions and use linking words to connect ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or precise. Words like 'calm,' 'quiet,' and 'problems' are used, but there's a lack of more sophisticated vocabulary. Expand your vocabulary related to sleep, relaxation, and stress to provide more nuanced answers.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are errors such as 'while you're listening them' and awkward phrasing like 'many problems can make people encouraged to sleep more.' Focus on using correct prepositions and structuring sentences more clearly. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to improve complexity and accuracy.

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