Band 5+: What was your dream when you were a child

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear answer. Consider expanding on the reasons behind your childhood dream and the impact it had on you, even if it wasn't realized. Adding details about your current situation and how it relates to your past aspirations would further enhance your response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and repetitions. The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between ideas. For example, instead of 'But I cannot achieve this dream because I didn't want this dream during the 70 and also 80 years,' a more concise and natural phrasing would be 'However, I didn't pursue this dream during the 70s and 80s.'

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'help in your lives' are slightly awkward. More precise language, such as 'improve people's lives' or 'make a difference in their lives,' would be better. The phrase 'different make their lives' is grammatically incorrect and needs rephrasing.

There are several grammatical errors. 'My dream when I was a child became a doctor' is incorrect; it should be 'My dream when I was a child was to become a doctor.' The phrase 'different make their lives' is grammatically incorrect. The tense is inconsistent in places. More accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed for a higher score.