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Band 7+: Why are so many young people obsessed with short videos?

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Well, in my opinion, many young people are obsessed with short videos because they create favorable opportunities for quick entertainment. As we know, today’s young generation faces a lot of pressure, which can leave them stressed and fatigued from work and studying. These short videos from TikTok or YouTube provide a quick, relaxing escape and can help alleviate stress. However, I think they should try healthier forms of entertainment instead of just watching these short videos, like doing exercise.

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Well, in my opinion, many young people are upset with short videos because short videos create favorable opportunities for them to have quick and fast entertainment. As we know, in this day, young generation have to face many pressure so they can be straight and fatigued from their work and studying. So these short videos from TikTok or YouTube makes them have quick, relaxing and can help them alleviate stress. However, I think they should try more healthy entertainment instead of watching these short videos like doing exercise.

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videos: 3

young: 2

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entertainment: 2

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question with a clear opinion. Consider expanding on the reasons behind the popularity of short videos beyond stress relief, perhaps mentioning aspects like accessibility, shareability, and the addictive nature of short-form content. While the suggestion for healthier alternatives is relevant, it could be integrated more smoothly into the main argument rather than appearing as an afterthought.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The speaker uses appropriate cohesive devices to connect ideas. While the fluency is good, there's a slight hesitation and a minor error in phrasing ("upset with short videos" instead of "obsessed with"). Minor improvements in word choice would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "favorable opportunities," "alleviate stress," and "fatigued" demonstrate a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used. For example, instead of 'quick and fast entertainment,' consider 'instant gratification' or 'immediate escapism'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence structure is generally simple. The phrase "many young people are upset with short videos" is grammatically correct but semantically incorrect. More complex grammatical structures and varied sentence types would improve the score. Consider using more sophisticated sentence structures to showcase a wider range of grammatical accuracy.

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