Band 6+: Why do some people refuse to eat animals ?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The answer provides a relevant reason for why some people refuse to eat animals, specifically mentioning a vegan diet. However, it could be improved by exploring additional reasons such as ethical concerns, environmental factors, or health considerations. Expanding on these points would enhance the depth of the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight hesitation and a minor grammatical error ('only can eat'), but overall the fluency is good. Try to incorporate a wider range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more smoothly. For example, you could add phrases like 'In addition,' or 'Furthermore,' to connect your points.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the answer uses relevant terms like 'vegan diet,' it could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary. Consider using synonyms for 'vegetables' or 'things that are not related to animals' to demonstrate a wider range of lexical resource. For example, you could use 'plant-based foods' or 'animal products' instead.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there is one noticeable error ('only can eat'). The sentence structure is relatively simple. To achieve a higher score, try to incorporate more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy and complexity.