Band 5+: Why do some people refuse to eat animals ?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is partially on topic and addresses the question. However, it lacks depth and detail. Consider expanding on the reasons provided, exploring ethical, environmental, or health-related arguments to support your points. A more comprehensive and nuanced response would improve the overall quality. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. However, the phrasing 'Some people are refused to eat animals' is grammatically incorrect and impacts fluency. Consider rephrasing to improve fluency and precision.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. 'Living beings' is acceptable, but a more nuanced term like 'sentient creatures' would demonstrate a wider range. 'Gods' is a bit simplistic; 'sacred' is a better choice, as in the refined answer. Expanding on the reasons for refusing to eat animals would improve lexical resource.

There's a grammatical error ('Some people are refused...'). While the answer is understandable, grammatical accuracy needs improvement. Using more complex sentence structures would enhance the score.