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Band 7+: ✅ You applied for a job at a company but haven't received a response yet. Write a letter to the HR department to inquire about the status of your application. • Mention the position you applied for and the date of application. • Explain that you are eager to know the status of your application. • Request an update and express your continued interest in the role.

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Dear Mrs Smith,

I am writing to enquire about the status of my application for the position of L&D specialist. I sent you my CV via LinkedIn last week, and I hope you received it and had the opportunity to review the file.

I would appreciate it if you could provide feedback regarding my candidacy. Actually, I would be grateful for any update about this vacancy.

Nowadays, the businesses face new challenges because of changes in the global economy. Due to my experience working in international companies, I believe we may commence a productive partnership. In particular, I have experience working with international teams, conducting trainings and leading organizational development initiatives. Moreover, you can find additional details in the attached files.

I remain very interested in this opportunity and I would be grateful for the chance to work together.

I will appreciate your feedback.

Sincerely yours,

Margarita Lavreniuk

Word Count: 148

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter addresses the requirements of the task, mentioning the position applied for and expressing continued interest. However, the date of application is missing. The paragraph about global economy challenges is somewhat irrelevant and could be more directly linked to the job application. To improve, ensure all points are addressed directly and maintain a clear focus on the purpose of the letter. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, the paragraph about global economy challenges and international experience feels somewhat disconnected from the main inquiry about the application status. Consider streamlining the content to maintain a stronger focus on the application and your interest in the role.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good range. Terms like 'candidacy,' 'vacancy,' 'productive partnership,' and 'organizational development initiatives' are well-chosen. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider using more varied phrasing to express your interest and inquiry.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. While the sentences are generally well-constructed, pay attention to sentence structure and clarity. For example, consider rephrasing sentences for better flow and impact. Ensure consistent use of punctuation throughout the letter.

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