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Band 7+: ✅ You applied for a job at a company but haven't received a response yet. Write a letter to the HR department to inquire about the status of your application. • Mention the position you applied for and the date of application. • Explain that you are eager to know the status of your application. • Request an update and express your continued interest in the role.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this message finds you well. The reason why I am addressing this correspondence about the status of my application for the designer position that I submitted on 13 th March . I am very eager to learn about any updates regarding my application and the hiring process.

I am genuinely excited about the opportunity to join Apple Company and contribute to the team with my skills and experiences. The values and mission of your company resonate deeply with me, and I am enthusiastic about the possibility of being part of such a dynamic organization.

If there are any updates or further information you could provide regarding my application status, I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing how I can contribute to Apple Company.

Best regards,

Lena Jones

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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application: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and structure could elevate it further. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter flows well, but some sentences could be restructured for better clarity and impact. Paragraphing is acceptable.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sophisticated and appropriate for the context. A wider range of vocabulary could be explored to enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. More complex grammatical structures could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range.

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