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Band 4+: ✅ You applied for a job at a company but haven't received a response yet. Write a letter to the HR department to inquire about the status of your application. • Mention the position you applied for and the date of application. • Explain that you are eager to know the status of your application. • Request an update and express your continued interest in the role.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the status of my application.

To begin with, I had tried to find and my best friend offered me this job which was very comfortable work for me. For this reason, I decided to apply to company because I was unemployed. I completed my application on the 15 th January.

Moreover, I am interested in the work so much and I waiting for this application’s answer impatienty. Futhermore, I am a person who is an aspirant the role of manager. I have expriences as a managet. And I gruadated prestigious university.

I shall be greateful if you answer my application in short of time and I will wait with anticipation.

Your faithfully,

Diyora Raxmatova.

Word Count: 128

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in conveying the message. The structure and focus could be improved to better meet the requirements of the task. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's coherence and cohesion are negatively impacted by grammatical errors and unclear sentence structures. Improving sentence structure and grammar will significantly enhance the flow and clarity of the letter.

Lexical Resource

4.5

While the letter demonstrates some vocabulary, the range is limited, and there are instances of inaccurate word choice. Expanding vocabulary and ensuring accurate usage will improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and understanding. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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