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Band 4+: 1. You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbours disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter o describe how this situation affects you; o explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; o ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

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Dear Madam Ayu,

I am writing to discuss a heavy matter about the noise from my neighbours and ask you for your help. Let me to explain to you what happened recently.

I move to your apartment one week ago and at first, everything was fine. The first troubles began three days ago and continue on this day. I often hear crying, shouting and contention at the same time. I am confused, what should I do because I think is too private and sensitive problems but I am also not convenience in this situation.

Moreover, I have been preparing for the IELTS exams for the next months. So, I must prepare well but the all noise make me cannot to concreate. I know difficult for me to solve this case. So therefore, I need your help as an apartment owner.

If you do not mind, can you please relocate me to any other room in apartment? Where I can enjoy some peaceful neighborhood and carry on my normal life. I apologize, if my request is a little bit tough. But please consider my situation and I will waiting for solution as soon as possible.

Thank you for attention.

Kindly Regards,

Ara.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

4.5

The letter partially addresses the task by describing the situation and asking for help, but it lacks a clear explanation of the steps taken to address the problem. Additionally, the request to be relocated to another room is not a typical or appropriate solution to the noise issue. It would have been more appropriate to ask the landlord to take action to resolve the noise problem directly.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter lacks coherence and cohesion as the ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the paragraphing is not well managed. Additionally, there are several language errors that affect the overall clarity and flow of the letter. It would be beneficial to organize the content into clear paragraphs and use transition words to improve the coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

3.5

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited, and there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings throughout the letter. It would be beneficial to use a wider range of vocabulary and to ensure the accurate and appropriate use of words to convey the intended meaning more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are numerous grammatical errors, including tense inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation errors. It is important to review and revise the letter for proper grammar and punctuation to improve accuracy and clarity.

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