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Band 5+: 40.Write a letter to an accommodation officer in a foreign university in which you have taken admission. In your letter

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Dear sir,

I hope you are in good health. My name is Nidhi Patel. I am from India, and I have enrolled as an undergraduate student in the mathematics department in your university. I am writing this letter to request you to arrange an accommodation to me in the university halls of residence.

My classes will start from 13 th of December, but I will come there 1st December. I have been in touch with some senior students through the messages. They told me that I should do conform with university accommodation office about my accommodation seat. As they are very helpful persons they offered to pick me up from the airport and I will live 3 to 4 days with them.

If I take about house that I would like a single room, but in case that is not possible then I can happy to share room with another. It would be nice if I have another student from India to share my room. It would be helpful if you provide me a room in D wing as my all seniors lives that building which is nearest to the university.

Hoping for a prompt response from you regarding this matter.

Your faithfully,

Nidhi Patel

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

university: 3

accommodation: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by clearly stating the purpose and providing necessary details. Minor improvements in clarity and structure could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences lack conciseness and precision, affecting the overall flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices could improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While the letter is understandable, several grammatical errors and inaccuracies affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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