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Band 5+: 5. A friend wants to get some information about an elementary school where one of your cousins studies. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • say why this school is a good elementary school • mention how expensive it is • explain why your friend should get his/her child admitted there

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Dear Priya ,

Hi there I hope you are doing well. I am penning this letter because I got up your message from you on WhatsApp. As you mentioned that message about information related to an elementry school which is my young cousin studies

I would say this primary school is good because all amenities which they set up in school to make children to access easy way . Recently I attended an annual program a month ago,so that I saw all facilities pictures such as sports, library, and they have extra curricular activities such as handmade making itemsand stitching the dress.

This school is expensive because they have all facilities than other school ,not only they focus study for children but also creating more activities which is suit for youngsters provide class for karathey for children safety that makes them more protective.

I would suggest your child for study owing to ,this is a best school for your what children due to standard and well grooming which helps them to good behaviour and social behaviour.This is correct choice to admit your child to make your child for bright future.

I hope see you soon.

Yours pal.

Yamuna

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Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 6

which: 4

children: 4

because: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing reasons why the school is good, mentioning the cost, and explaining why the friend should enroll their child. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and word choice for greater clarity and conciseness. Also, ensure consistent use of grammar and a more natural tone throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve coherence, focus on creating clearer transitions between ideas and ensuring each paragraph has a central topic. Using more formal language and structuring your points logically will enhance the letter's readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inappropriate for the context. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific and accurate. For example, instead of 'make children to access easy way,' consider using 'facilitate children's learning.' Also, avoid informal expressions like 'Hi there' in a semi-formal letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense, and word choice. For example, 'I got up your message from you' is incorrect. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofreading carefully and using grammar check tools can help identify and correct these errors.

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