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Band 6+: A bar chart showing the number of international tourists (in millions) who visited five countries (France, USA, China, Italy, and Australia) in 2010 and 2020.

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The image depicts international tourists (in millions) for five countries in 2010 and 2020: France with 70 in 2010 and 75 in 2020; USA with 76 in 2010 and 80 in 2020; China with 56 in 2010 and 60 in 2020; Italy with 40 in 2010 and 45 in 2020; Australia with 32 in 2010 and 35 in 2020.

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The bar graph displays the number of international tourists who visited five countries namely France, USA, China, Italy, and Australia in 2010 and 2020.

In all of the countries, the number of tourists that visited in 2020 exceeds that of 2010, with the most increase being observed in the USA. Additionally, USA has the most international tourists out of any country in the group, attracting around 70 million tourists in 2020, while Australia has the least amount of visitors, maxing out at around 17 million.

In France and Australia, there has not been a big increase in the number of visitors since 2010. The most notable increase in the number of tourists is in the USA, with approximately 8 million tourists increased since 2010.

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The report covers the main trends and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Australia's tourist numbers). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and include more specific data points for all countries, not just the USA. Also, avoid stating absolute numbers without specifying the year. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are some areas where the flow could be improved. For instance, the transition between the overview and the specific details could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

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The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information. However, there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'number of tourists,' you could use synonyms like 'visitor count' or 'tourism figures.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to tourism trends.

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The report generally demonstrates good grammatical control, but there are a few errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Review the report carefully to identify and correct any grammatical errors. Also, try to vary your sentence structures to make the writing more engaging.

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