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Band 4+: A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in * describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Dhruv,

It’s very exciting to hear that you’ll be moving to Sydney for your work and congratulations on your new job!

As you’ll probably working in downtown, perhaps you could live near town square which is one of the stunning places acrosss the city. There’s a lot to do here during the weekend times and I’m sure you won’t miss that.

I’ve prepared a ton of things to do, as soon as you land here. Intially, we’ll prepare your presto card where you’ll be using for your daily commuting. The Transportation here is very impressive than worse crowd of Mumbai. Here you’ll find three modes of travelling that is bus, street car’s and sub-ways.

Later, I’ve decided to go at pub during evening time for chilling out where I’ll introduce you with my friends. I’m pretty sure that you’ll also make new friends at your work place.

Anyway, Can’t wait to see you here.

Best Regards

Harsh

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

you'll: 5

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by suggesting an interesting part of the city to live in and briefly describing the public transport. However, more details could have been provided about meeting new people in the city.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks proper paragraphing. There are some issues with cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing public transport and meeting new people. Consider organizing the content more effectively.

Lexical Resource

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but there are some spelling and word choice errors (e.g., 'anohter' should be 'another', 'acrosss' should be 'across', 'Intially' should be 'Initially', 'sub-ways' should be 'subways'). Try to use more varied and precise vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Work on improving subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure for better accuracy.

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