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Band 4+: A friend has told you that he or she feels lonely in their new city away from their family. Write to your friend, and ‐ Explain why people can feel this way ‐ Give some ideas on how to solve the problem ‐ Ask your friend to contact you and tell you if this works

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Dear Peter,

I know you are feeling lonely in the new city away from the family, I want you to be strong and overcome this situation. Recently, I heard this from many of our friends, Who moved to different city for either job or studies. There are many reasons for this feeling, one among that is missing home, Which makes you feel that way. Another reason is as it is new place, we wouldnt have any friends to go around and spend time

I have comeup with few ideas to overcome this problem. First idea is to start making connection with people around your new home or in your college so that you feel better. Second idea is to engage yourself in reading books, which is your best hobby. I even heard that there are few book clubs so you have jus join in that and make friends from that club.

Finally, try to follow these ideas and let me know the results.

All the best,

Keerthi

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by explaining why people feel lonely in a new city and providing ideas to solve the problem. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to the friend's situation. Encourage providing more personalized suggestions.

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The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. Try to separate the ideas more clearly into paragraphs for better coherence. Additionally, consider using transition words to improve the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are repetitive, and there are errors in word choice and phrasing. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using more varied expressions to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence construction to improve grammatical accuracy.

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Band 4+: A friend has told you that he or she feels lonely in their new city away from their family. Write to your friend, and ‐ Explain why people can feel this way ‐ Give some ideas on how to solve the problem ‐ Ask your friend to contact you and tell you if this works

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