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Band 8+: A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to give my suggestions on how best the money for the local project should be spent. As an indigene of this community, I would like to discuss the importance of funding the local children’s sports team.

Firstly, sponsoring the team will inspire these little ones to become better citizens in the future, since most of them have parents who are struggling to send them to school. Secondly, I believe it will bring about a positive change in my community as it will strengthen the bond amongst them.

Alternatively, paying for the concerts will also be beneficial for the public as it will foster team collaboration between individuals. Additionally, it will motivate local artists to come out to perform for the community, which will help build their future musical careers.

I would like to suggest that the money should be divided into two: one part will be used to cater for the sports team while the second half can be used to fund the concert, as both projects will be beneficial for my people.

I would be very happy if my suggestion is considered.

Yours faithfully,

Miss Mercy.

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Overall Band Score

8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

local: 3

community: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

8

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear arguments for both options and a well-reasoned suggestion.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow. Ideas are logically connected and presented in a clear and coherent manner.

Lexical Resource

8

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using words like 'indigene', 'inspire', 'foster', and 'motivate' appropriately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter is grammatically accurate and uses a variety of sentence structures effectively.

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