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Band 7+: A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to share my experience about a book that influenced me the most, and I firmly believe that this book will also inspire our young generation as well.

This book is about the life story of a legendary cricketer “Sachin Tendulkar”. Sachin is worshiped as god when it comes to sports in India.This book unveils various aspects about his personal journey that people were not aware about before, such as, he performed his father’s last rites and came back the same day to the ground to play for his country. The sheer dedication and passion towards cricket has made me really motivated of what I want to pursue in my career.

Moreover, he has dealt with many life-threatening injuries in his career, and every time he has come out of it by staying calm and by taking one day at a time while doing his rehabilitation. For sportspersons, it can be mentally challenging to deal with serious injuries, and this book will educate them about how manage your injuries in an efficient way.

In my opinion, this book will be an eye-opener for many young individuals, especially who belong to some sport. Also, it will elevate the knowledge of our youth on how to deal with certain circumstances.

Yours faithfully,

Pawandeep

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Overall Band Score

7
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
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injuries: 3
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Task Response

8
The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing a clear description of the book, explaining its influence on you, and commenting on its potential influence on others. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific examples of how the book influenced you personally and elaborating on why it would resonate with a broader audience.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas are presented in a logical sequence, and the paragraphing is effective. However, there's room to enhance the transitions between paragraphs to create a smoother flow. For instance, you could use more varied linking words or phrases to connect ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate. There are some instances where more precise word choices could enhance the impact. For example, instead of saying the book 'will elevate the knowledge,' consider using a more specific verb like 'deepen' or 'broaden.' Also, try to vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only a few minor errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. For example, 'motivated of what I want' could be improved to 'motivated about what I want'. Reviewing and correcting these small errors will further enhance the clarity and professionalism of your writing.

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