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Band 5+: A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter for the recent opening for the role of manager in your restaurant which i came to know about via newspaper.

Currently i am working as a supervisor in the TAJ hotel which is located in the mumbai city. i have been working here for last 2years.

I am very suitable candidate for this role as, i have very much experience in this fileld as i have done my degree in hotel management and i have also done internship from the couple of hotels and their managers are happy with my work and i am working as a supervisor from last 2years.

My current job timings are from 12:00PM to 10:00PM from Monday-Friday,

if you conduct the interview, i can be available on the morning on working days and on the weekends to dicuss further more about this role.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

Digvijay Rana

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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working: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, expanding on specific experiences and achievements would strengthen the response.

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The letter's message is mostly clear. Improving the flow and paragraphing would enhance readability and coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

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3.5

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