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Band 4+: An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Maria,

I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am delighted to hear you are planning a two – week holiday in our region and I’m thrilled to give you some information and advice.

On the 5th June next week we are holding an festival, so I recommend you come at that time as there will be a lot learn about our culture . There are variety places you can stay at, but the best place you can stay is in the visitors village house, unless you don’t mind staying with me at my house.

There are a lot of things to see around . We have beautiful mountains that have nice view and you can see different kinds of animals, eg cattles, donkeys and goat. You won’t have the need to go to the zoo to see anymore .

Since it will be a freezing month l suggest you bring warm cloths and a lot of jackets and few boots. Village people don’t like a lady who wears pants, like jeans and tights but you can wear trek suits since it will be cold, and Don’t wear shorts things .

Am looking forward to seeing you.

Best regards,

Phili.

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by offering to find somewhere for the friend to stay, giving advice on what to do and see in the area, and providing information about what clothes to bring. However, some information is unclear or inaccurate, such as the date of the festival and the clothing advice. It would be better to provide more specific and accurate details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. The ideas could be better structured to improve the overall flow of the letter. Additionally, some sentences are unclear and need to be revised for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More precise and accurate word choices would enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, there are some grammatical errors that affect the overall quality of the language used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation and sentence construction need improvement for better accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial.

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