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Band 4+: Describe the bar chart and compare the main features where relevant

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The image is a bar graph depicting "Undergraduates Year 1: average pass rates" for various fields of study in 2008 and 2012. In 2008, Business had a 70% pass rate, Computer Science 40%, Health Sciences 55%, Humanities 45%, Maths and Engineering 35%, and Science 40%. In 2012, Business had an 80% pass rate, Computer Science 45%, Health Sciences 60%, Humanities 50%, Maths and Engineering 40%, and Science 45%.

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The given figure compare the how to student average pass rates between 2008 to 2012.

Overall it is evident that the student average in every subject computer had a hightest and humanities had lowest and remaining are stable in the following figure.

It is evident that in 2008 business had the just 20% proprotion but in 2012 business increase three times than 2008 . computer science had a hightest percentage but in 2012 slightly increase . In both year computer science percentages which was 80% and almost 90% respectively . Health sciences remains constant and equal in the both year .

ON the other hand , humanities saw the lowest margine throught out the period of time . maths in 2008 maths stands for 40% and then in final year maths increase there proportion in the figure . science carry the 20% in the begining year but in final year science had increase the percentage which was 2 times than first

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science: 4

computer: 3

maths: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but specific data is often incorrect (e.g., business percentages, computer science values, health sciences constancy). The report also lacks a clear comparison of all fields and includes irrelevant or confusing statements. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, making clear comparisons between years and subjects, and ensuring the response is well-organized and coherent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The introduction is brief and the overview is vague. The body paragraphs mix subjects and years without clear grouping, making it difficult to follow. Use clear topic sentences and separate paragraphs for different comparisons. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect, such as comparing subjects within a year or changes over time.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'proprotion', 'hightest', 'margine'). There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it is often inaccurate. Expand your range of vocabulary to include precise terms for describing trends (e.g., 'increased', 'decreased', 'remained stable', 'slightly rose') and use appropriate synonyms to avoid repetition. Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('figure compare'), incorrect verb forms ('the how to student average'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, practice writing clear, simple sentences and then gradually incorporate more complex structures. Review basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and the use of articles. Proofread your work to correct errors.

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