Multiple Graphs

Band 5+: Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays two pie charts. The first, titled 'Australian household energy use', shows the following distribution: heating at 42%, water heating at 30%, other appliances at 15%, refrigeration at 7%, lighting at 4%, and cooling at 2%. The second chart, titled 'Australian household greenhouse gas emissions', presents these figures: water heating at 32%, other appliances at 28%, heating at 15%, refrigeration at 14%, lighting at 8%, and cooling at 3%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The pie chart shows that the Australian household use two resources first one is energy as well as second one is gas emissions.

It is considered that the percentage of heating is highest and the percentage of cooling is lowest in Australian household energy use. In contrast, the percentage of water heating is highest and percentage of cooling is lowest in Australian household gas emissions.

Australian household energy use such as heating, water heating, refrigerator, other appliances, lighting and cooling up to the 42%, 30%, 7%, 15%, 4%, and 2%. On the other hand, Australian household greenhouse gas emissions are same as it we use in first pie char is and the percentage is 15%,32%,14%,28%,8%, 3%.

At conclusion, the higher percentage of Australian household energy use and green house gas emissions is heating and water heating and on the other side, the reduce percentage of both is same such as cooling.

Word Count: 151

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percentage: 7

household: 6

heating: 6

australian: 5

energy: 4

cooling: 4

water: 3

other: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the data but includes some inaccuracies and lacks detailed comparisons. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and comparisons between the two charts. Also, ensure accurate data representation and avoid repetition.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the information. Improve coherence by grouping related information together and using transition words to connect ideas. For example, you could dedicate one paragraph to describing the energy use and another to gas emissions, highlighting the key differences and similarities. The report also lacks a clear overview statement in the introduction.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage is highest/lowest,' try using phrases like 'constitutes the largest proportion' or 'represents the smallest fraction.' Expand your vocabulary related to energy consumption and emissions to provide a more detailed and nuanced description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'Australian household use two resources' should be 'Australian households use two resources'. There are also issues with the use of articles (the, a, an) and prepositions. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction to enhance the clarity and accuracy of your writing. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

This pie charts shows how energy is used in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. The chart show that most part of energy used to heating and water heating. The smallest water use was spent on cooling. Also most part of gas emissions was from water […]

Band 5+

Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

The pair of charts compares 6 different categories (heating, cooling, lighting, water heating, refrigeration, and other appliances) in terms of their energy use and gas emissions in Australian households. Units are measured in percentages. As far as household energy consumption is concerned, heating is the dominant energy consumer, followed by water heating; remaining categories account […]

Band 7+

Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

The pair of charts compere 6 different categories (heating, cooling, lighting, water heating, refrigeration and other appliances) in terms of their energy use and gas emissions in Australian households. Units are measured in percentages. As far as household energy consumption is concerned heating is dominant energy consumer, followed by water heating, remaining categories account for […]

Band 6+

See All

Diagrams show the layout of the library from 1974 to the present day

The diagram illustrates how a library has been changed from 1975 to the present. Overall, the library experienced several developments throughout the period. Some facilities remained unchanged, namely the library desk, the children’s book shelf, and the toilet. In contrast, other facilities were replaced, while the shared areas were redeveloped. In the present, the books […]

Band 7+

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009, the second compares the percentage of trains running in time and target in the period.

The first line graph illustrates how many people travelled by train between 2000 and 2009, and the second graph provides information regarding the proportion of trains running on time. Overall, the number of passengers witnessed a noticeable increase, despite some fluctuations. Moreover, on-time trains recorded the highest figure in the final year, although they were […]

Band 9

Part 1: The graph below shows the weekly working hours or men and women omen in in government institutions and private institutions.

The pie charts provide data on male and female employees working hours in governmental and private sectors. Overall, over nearly a third of men regardless of their sector, tend to work more than 46 hours, whereas for women, this figure is nowhere near as dramatic. Notably, the majority of female workers usually allocate 6-12 hours […]

Band 7+

The charts below show athe results of a survey about what people of different age group say makes them most happy.

The pie chart provides the survey results of two grouprs of people: under 30 and over 30. The chart illustrates the answers about the things which provide hapiness, including finance, career success, hobbies, traveling, family etc. Overall, such factors as achievement at work and doing hobbies are named in both groups, and moreover, the proportions […]

Band 6+

See All

Band 5+: Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

Energy use and gas emissions of different categories in Australian households

Other Topics:

Diagrams show the layout of the library from 1974 to the present day

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009, the second compares the percentage of trains running in time and target in the period.

Part 1: The graph below shows the weekly working hours or men and women omen in in government institutions and private institutions.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The charts below describe 4 sectors of employment, in 2009 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The charts below show athe results of a survey about what people of different age group say makes them most happy.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium