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The image shows line graphs for Japan, Sweden, and USA depicting the percentage of people aged 65 and above from 1940 to 2040. In 1940, Japan at 5%, Sweden at 7%, USA at 9%. In 1960, Japan at 6%, Sweden at 9%, USA at 10%. In 1980, Japan at 9%, Sweden at 14%, USA at 11%. In 2000, Japan at 17%, Sweden at 17%, USA at 12%. In 2020, Japan at 28%, Sweden at 20%, USA at 16%. In 2040, Japan projected at 37%, Sweden at 25%, USA at 22%.

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The line graph describes the proportion of individuals aged 65 and over from three different countries between 1940 and 2040.

Overall, there is an upward trend in the percentages of aged people living in Japan, Sweden, and the USA during the period shown. Additionally, starting at the lowest point, Japan’s percentage of those age 65 and over is expected to have the most dramatic increase compared with the remaining countries.

Initially, it can be seen that the USA’s figure was at around 9% in 1940, making the USA become the leading country of 65-and-over – year-old citizens. Its upward trend continued the following years until it reached a peak of nearly 18% in 2000 and was overtaken by the percentage of old people in Sweden although they both shared the same upward trend in the first 60 years. from 2000, while there was a significant drop in the proportion of people age 60 and over in Japan, this figure is anticipated to rise again to about 23% by 2040.

In the first four decades, although Japan’s figure remained unchanged, it rose sharply and surpassed the share of Sweden in 2020 at 20%. Japan is predicted to be the leading country in the percentage of people who are aged 65 and over by 2040.

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the requirements of the task, presenting a general overview and highlighting key trends and figures from the graph. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the USA's peak was not nearly 18% in 2000, and the projected figure for Japan in 2040 is not 23%. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and provide more specific comparisons between the countries throughout the period.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and main body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is adequate. However, there are instances where the connection between sentences could be smoother. For example, in the third paragraph, the transition between the USA's peak and Sweden overtaking it could be more explicit. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for the task. Terms like 'proportion,' 'upward trend,' 'dramatic increase,' and 'surpassed' are used appropriately. However, there's room for improvement in using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to describe the data. For instance, instead of 'rose sharply,' consider using terms like 'increased significantly' or 'experienced a rapid surge.' Also, ensure consistent and accurate use of terminology related to age groups (e.g., 'aged people,' '65-and-over').

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The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'making the USA become the leading country of 65-and-over - year-old citizens' is awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. Proofreading carefully can help eliminate these minor errors.

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