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Band 5+: IELTS general writing task 1 sample: You have won a holiday to Hawaii with one extra ticket. Write a letter to someone to invite them along with you. In the letter: – Explain what has happened and that you would like them to come – Give details of when the trip will take place – Inform the person of the things they will need for the trip

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Hello Ahmad,

I hope you are doing well and you will be in the gym right now.I wished if you were here , beside me to hear this is a dream come true story.

Few weeks back I was writing these articles, regarding innovation in the dentistry ,in addition to that, my researcher, Dr.Blake was very impressed, by work and consistency and luckily, he gave me two tickets to Hawaii to spend holiday there.

Indeed Dr Blake will be joining us there, no worries it is only me ,he needs to discuss joining his clinic.

As you know I only got you, and you are my best friend, further your mom your parents gave me the permission.

Allow me to the date when are we leaving.It is on 22nd of December, at 9pm and we will be back at 29 December, in the morning 10 am.You my friend start to pack clothes, the weather there is not cold , so get few shirts and trousers and in addition to that don’t forget to pack a formal dress and please don’t forget your passport.

I hope you find this letter soon

Your friend

Umar

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5
The task is mostly addressed; however, some details could be more clearly explained and organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter's message is understandable, but the flow and organization could be significantly improved. Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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