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Band 4+: Informal letter write a letter to your friend about your favourite hobby. . What your hobby is . why you enjoy it . benefits this hobby

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Dear jaki

I am writing to tell you about my favourite hobby

My hobby is football. When my school life time i play football with my friend. My favourite team is brazil i still suport this team 2018 and right now. My favourite player is neymar, He is most telented player in the world.

When i watch football match in tv screen i so exciting for this time.Because i really a crazy fan of football. Everyday i wating for this time when start the match. When my favourite team win i really enjoy the moment.

Yes,many things benifit for me. When i watch play football i understand every ruls, I to say every player name and who is position he play in the fild.

Lokking forword to hearing form you soon

All the best

maruf

Word Count: 135

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
football: 5
favourite: 4
player: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5
The letter generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some areas where it could be improved. The content is somewhat repetitive and includes some irrelevant details (e.g., specific years and player names). To improve, focus on providing more detailed explanations of why you enjoy the hobby and the specific benefits it offers. Also, ensure the language is consistently informal and friendly. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and create a smoother reading experience. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to this' or 'Furthermore' to link related ideas. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of your hobby to maintain clarity.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and could be enhanced with more varied and descriptive words. Try to incorporate synonyms and more specific terms related to football to make your writing more engaging. For instance, instead of just saying 'exciting,' you could use words like 'thrilling' or 'exhilarating.' Expanding your vocabulary will help you express your ideas more effectively. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles (a, an, the). For example, 'When my school life time i play football with my friend' should be revised to 'During my school days, I used to play football with my friends.' Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will help improve accuracy.

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