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Band 7+: Letter to accommodation officer to inform about problems with current roommate

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Harsh, a student at the University of Waterloo living at Fergus House in room 301A. I have issues with my current accommodation as my roommate hosts frequent parties. I am enrolled in the Computer Engineering program. My academics combined with my co-op search require me to work long hours.

However, the student living with me is in a very different program and has lots of time to party which involves loud music and big gatherings. I cannot work in this situation and am often set back in my schedule. This situation has also impacted both my physical and mental health as I am unable to sleep and stressed about my studies.

After repeated attempts to communicate with my roommate, all my efforts were in vain. I would appreciate it if I am accommodated with students who prefer a quiet environment. This would not only help me focus more on my studies but also help my mental health.

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Overall Band Score

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the issue of problems with the current roommate and clearly states the need for a change in accommodation. To improve, consider providing more specific details about the impact of the roommate's behavior on your studies and health.

Coherence & Cohesion

7.5

The letter is well-organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The ideas are presented logically, and there is a good use of cohesive devices. To enhance coherence, ensure smoother transitions between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used appropriately throughout the letter. To achieve a higher score, try incorporating more sophisticated and varied vocabulary to express ideas more precisely.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with mostly accurate use of punctuation and grammar. To further improve, pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence structures for more complexity.

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