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Band 5+: Look at the title and the graph about average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Melbourne. Write four introductory sentences about the graph using introductory verbs from the box on page 186. Try to use different sentence structures and vocabulary in each sentence.

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The image displays a line graph with three lines representing average temperatures in Paris, Dubai, and Melbourne over April, May, and June. Paris starts at around 8°C in April, increases to around 14°C in May, and around 22°C in June. Dubai begins at about 26°C, rises to approximately 30°C, and reaches nearly 34°C. Melbourne shows a decrease from about 17°C to 14°C and ends at roughly 11°C. The temperature scale ranges from 0°C to 35°C, increasing by increments of 5°C.

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The given line graph demonstrates the average temperatures of Paris, Dubai and Melbourne during three months: april, may and june.

Overall, it can be seen that the temperature in Paris and Dubai experience an upward trend throughout three months, with the exception of Melbourne temperature, which had a downward trend over three months. There were some fluctuations in temperature in Dubai and Melbourne over the period.

Initially, the temperature in Paris was the highest in april at roughly 20 degrees and kept rising to under 25 degrees in may, while the temperature in Melbourne decreased gradually from 15 grades in april to particularly 13 degrees in may. By june the temperature in Paris rebounded from 24 grade in may to over 30 degrees, whereas the temperature in Melbourne fell steadily to 10 degrees in june.

The temperature in Dubai had increased from 10 grades in april to almost 15 degrees, then, the temperature rose slightly to particularly 16 grades in june.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

temperature: 9

degrees: 6

melbourne: 5

paris: 4

dubai: 4

april: 4

three: 3

grades: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the graph, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The introductory sentence is appropriate, and the overall structure is clear. However, the data reported for Paris and Dubai are incorrect (e.g., Paris starts at 8°C, not 20°C; Dubai starts at 26°C, not 10°C). Additionally, the report omits the specific values for Melbourne in June and misstates the trends for Dubai (which actually rises steadily). The language is generally clear, but there are some grammatical errors (e.g., 'experience an upward trend' should be 'experiences an upward trend', 'grades' instead of 'degrees'). To improve, ensure accurate data representation and proofread for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'with the exception of Melbourne temperature' could be more smoothly integrated. Additionally, the final paragraph introduces Dubai without a clear link to the previous paragraph. To improve, use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast' or 'meanwhile' to connect ideas, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. Words like 'grades' instead of 'degrees' and 'particularly' instead of 'approximately' are misused. There is some repetition of 'temperature' and 'three months'. To enhance lexical resource, use synonyms such as 'figures', 'data', 'period', and employ more precise terms like 'peaked', 'plummeted', 'gradually increased'. Also, avoid informal or incorrect terms like 'grades'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For instance, 'the temperature in Paris and Dubai experience' should be 'experience' (subject-verb agreement), and 'with the exception of Melbourne temperature' should be 'with the exception of Melbourne's temperature'. Also, 'had increased' is not the correct tense; simple past 'increased' is more appropriate. Punctuation and capitalization of months (e.g., 'april' should be 'April') need attention. To improve, review subject-verb agreement, use of articles, and tense consistency.

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Band 5+: Look at the title and the graph about average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Melbourne. Write four introductory sentences about the graph using introductory verbs from the box on page 186. Try to use different sentence structures and vocabulary in each sentence.

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