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Band 4+: Look at the title and the graph about average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Melbourne. Write four introductory sentences about the graph using introductory verbs from the box on page 186. Try to use different sentence structures and vocabulary in each sentence.

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The image displays a line graph with three lines representing average temperatures in Paris, Dubai, and Melbourne over April, May, and June. Paris starts at around 8°C in April, increases to around 14°C in May, and around 22°C in June. Dubai begins at about 26°C, rises to approximately 30°C, and reaches nearly 34°C. Melbourne shows a decrease from about 17°C to 14°C and ends at roughly 11°C. The temperature scale ranges from 0°C to 35°C, increasing by increments of 5°C.

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The graph illiustrates the proximate temperature from April to June in three countriues, which are Paris, Dubai and Melburne.

Due to graph spring is very hot in Paris. In April the avarage temperature there is 20 degrees, which raises to nearly 25 degrees till May. The temperature countinues surging and in June it reaches more tahn 30 degrees.

Opposite to Paris, Dubai’s spring is mild. In April there is only 10 degrees and it does not even reach 15 degrees in the end of May. Summer starts with not that high temperature, just about 16 degrees.

In Melburne weather during spring is hotter than in Dubai but not as hot as in Paris. There is an enjoyable 15 degrees in April and the temperature starts dereasing. In June Melburne is quite cold city. Summer starts with just 10 degrees.

In conclusion, Paris is the hottest city, among given ones, as in spring as in summer. Melburne is hotter than Dubai in spring, but the temperature in Dubai raises and in summer it is much higher than the temperature in Melburne.

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temperature: 7

paris: 5

spring: 5

degrees: 5

april: 4

dubai: 4

summer: 4

melburne: 4

there: 3

starts: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the temperature trends in Paris, Dubai, and Melbourne, but it contains significant inaccuracies in the reported temperatures. The descriptions of the temperature data are not well-supported by the graph. To improve, focus on accurately extracting and reporting the data from the graph. Pay close attention to the temperature values for each city in each month. Also, organize the information more clearly, perhaps by discussing each city's temperature changes in a separate paragraph or by comparing and contrasting the cities' temperatures more directly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons between the cities. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. Consider organizing the report by city or by month to improve clarity. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') to link ideas and sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and contains inaccuracies ('proximate temperature,' 'countriues,' 'surging'). There is a lack of precision in describing temperature changes. Use a wider range of vocabulary related to temperature and trends (e.g., 'gradual increase,' 'significant drop,' 'fluctuates'). Ensure accurate spelling and word choice. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. For example, 'Due to graph spring is very hot in Paris' is grammatically incorrect and unclear.

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