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Band 5+: Mixed graphs. Summarize the information by selecting key information and make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains a pie chart and a table. The pie chart shows Australian nationality at 73%, Chinese at 14%, British at 7%, Dutch at 3%, New Zealander at 2%, and Other at 1%. The table indicates the percentage of nationalities in the City and Countryside, with Australian at City 80% and Countryside 20%, British at City 89% and Countryside 11%, New Zealander at City 90% and Countryside 10%, Chinese at City 99% and Countryside 1%, and Dutch at City 83% and Countryside 17%.

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THE CHARTS BELOW DEMONSTRATE POPULATIONS IN AUSTRALIA IN DIFFERENT NATIONALITIES AND AREAS.

OVERALL, POPULATION IN AUSTRALIA HITS THE HIGHEST MARK OF POPULATION IN SOME AREAS. MEANWHILE, POPULATION IN DUTCH IS THE LOWEST ONE. WE CAN SEE THAT IN AUSTRALIA 73% OF RESIDENTS BUT IN THE TABLE MOST OF THE PEOPLE LIVE IN THE CITIES 80 PER CENT FOR CITIES AND 20 PER CENT OF POPULATION PREFER TO LIVE IN COUNTRYSIDE RESPECTIVELY.

WHEN IT COMES TO BRITISH THE PIE CHART SHOWS 7%, MEANWHILE 89% OF RESIDENTS LIVE IN A CITIES AND ONLY 11 PER CENT OF PEOPLE LIVE IN SUBURBS. THE LOWEST ONE IS DUTCH PEOPLE WHO ARE LIVE IN MODERN CITIES SHOWS 83% AND 17% IN COUNTRYSIDE, RESULTS OF DUTCH CHANGED IN TABLE. TABLE SHOWS THE CHINESE PEOPLE INCREASE UP TO 99% LIVING IN THE CITIES AND ONLY 1% OF POPULATION LIVE IN THE COUNTRYSIDE. NOWADAYS MANY PEOPLE PREFER TO LIVE IN CITIES RATHER THAN RURAL AREAS.

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cities: 6

population: 5

people: 5

australia: 3

dutch: 3

table: 3

countryside: 3

shows: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization and clarity. The overview is present but could be more concise and focused. The body paragraphs contain relevant information, but the connections between the pie chart and the table could be made more explicit. There are also some inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, focus on providing a clearer overview, ensuring accurate data representation, and structuring the body paragraphs to highlight key comparisons between the two visuals.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The 'OVERALL' statement is vague and doesn't effectively summarize the data. Transitions between nationalities and locations could be smoother. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to connect ideas and improve the overall coherence. Paragraphing could be improved by grouping related information together more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to fully convey the nuances of the data. There is some repetition of words like 'population' and 'people'. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to demographics and geographical distribution. For example, instead of 'people live in cities,' consider using phrases like 'urban residents' or 'city dwellers.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('population hits'), subject-verb agreement issues ('population in Dutch is'), and awkward phrasing ('the lowest one is Dutch people who are live'). Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures to enhance clarity and sophistication.

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