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Band 5+: One of your relatives far from home for ages wants to visit your home village on holiday Write a letter to him/her In your letter Recommend the changes of your village. Describe the types of accommodation he/she could choose to stay Say what you would like to show him/her in your country Write about 120-150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear you,

I am glad to see that you are still good.I am excited to hear your desire to visit my home village.I have some suggestions for you,which i think you will be interested.

The home village has changed so much since you left.The scenery has changed a bit but still kept the wonderful beach view.There are more houses,the population of the village has increased,which makes the atmosphere at the village becomes more eventful.A park and a market have been built.We can give them a visit when you arrive.

There is a homestay which is far from my house about 500 meters.this is a modern homestay with a small garden.At night,we can have a BBQ party in the garden if you want.Or you can live with me.

When you arrive,i want to show you my brand new car.I want to you to somewhere and we can talk to each other while driving.

I look forward to your response.When you arrive,call me

Yours faithfully

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Task Response

6.5

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4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

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3.5

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