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Band 6+: ou have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

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Dear Pat,

Thanks for hosting the getogether last weekend at your place. I just found out that I left my coat in your house.

Everyone really had a good time enjoying the party, I got tired on sunday evening and I left with my friend. Later next morning I realized that I left my coat in the basement of your house.

It is a columbia brand, green colour leather jacket, it should look brand new since it is rarley used. If my memory serves my right I left the jacket in the basement’s walk-in closet. I have my office key in right side pocket and my car keys on inner pocket.

Since I have my office keys in the coat, I would probably need it by tomorrow morning. How about meeting at a coffee shop today at 7pm?. If not i will drop my at your home next day on my way to office.

Looking forward for your response,

Best regards,

Mohan

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining that the coat was left at the friend's house, describing the coat and its location, and making suggestions for getting the belongings back. However, there are some lapses in content, such as not explicitly mentioning the important belongings in the pockets and not providing clear suggestions for getting the belongings back. It would be better to explicitly state the important belongings and provide more specific suggestions for retrieving the coat and belongings.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some lapses in coherence and cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the party and realizing the coat was left behind. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better organization and clarity.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary, and the language used is generally accurate and appropriate. There is a good attempt at describing the coat, but some more sophisticated and precise vocabulary could be used. Additionally, more varied and sophisticated expressions could enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

A wide range of grammatical structures is attempted with generally good control. However, there are some errors in punctuation, tense consistency, and sentence structure that affect the overall accuracy. Proofreading for these errors would improve the grammatical range and accuracy.

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