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Band 5+: ou will take a short holiday in London next month and would like to spend some time with a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Tell him when you will be in London and why • Ask him for recommendations of what to do there • Suggest some things you can do together You should write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Hey Dev,

I hope you are doing well. I am glad to let you know that next month in May, I’ll be visiting London for about four weeks.

In regards to that, I wanted to know that where should I go to the places where I can enjoy my trip, as you live over there since last ten years. I know few places like BigBang tower and the London bridge. If you could tell me more that would be great as I would like to go somewhere I can do trekking or any kind of adventures.

Lastly, I was wondering if you’re free next month. If so, we can also plan the road trips. Let me know, if you like my plan so we can hotel bookings.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Warm Wishes,

Dhruv.

Word Count: 137

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by mentioning the purpose of the visit to London, asking for recommendations, and suggesting activities to do together. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to fully cover all aspects of the task. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with the flow of ideas. The organization of the letter could be improved by separating the information into more distinct paragraphs. Additionally, some transitions between ideas would enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. More sophisticated and varied vocabulary related to travel and leisure activities could be incorporated to enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, some sentences could be phrased more naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter demonstrates an attempt at a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout. Paying closer attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and article usage would improve the grammatical accuracy. Additionally, punctuation errors should be addressed for better clarity.

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