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Band 6+: Pie chart: The chart shows the reasons why people moved from one part of Vietnam to live in another. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. Here are the data for each reasons why Vietnamese people moved internally in 2012 (in percentages). Employment (54.5%); Study (11.4%); Marriage (21%); Others (13.1%)

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The pie chart demonstrates the reasons of Vietnam’s people moved internally in 2012. Unit are measured in percentages.Overall, people who lived in Vietnam decided to move in another part of country are categorized into four groups (Employment, Marriage, Others, and Study). The largest proportion of the reasons answered because of the employment, while the smallest was due to academic studies.

The percentage of employment had almost a half of the total, at 54.5 percent, which higher approximately by 33.5 percent than that of marriage. The number of people chose marriage as their main reason, making it was the second ranked of this data, at 21.0 percent.

In addition, Vietnam’s people gave another reason based on their live background of this survey rathen than chose between employment, study, and marriage, with the percentage at 13.1 percent. However, the remaining 11.4 percent, which was a very small percentage was resulted from study needs.

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