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Band 9: Question The line graph below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries between 2000 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph titled 'The percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 - 2012)'. For Germany, the percentages were approximately 33% in 2000, 34% in 2004, 35% in 2008, and 36.5% in 2012. Italy's figures were 26% (2000), 31% (2004), 33% (2008), and 39% (2012). France's data points were 25% (2000), 37% (2004), 30% (2008), and 31.5% (2012). The UK had percentages of 3.5% (2000), 9% (2004), 16% (2008), and 26% (2012). For Belgium, the values were 17% (2000), 28% (2004), 29% (2008), and 28% (2012).

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries (Germany, Italy, France, the UK and Belgium) between 2000 and 2012.

Overall, the percentage of women in parliament increased in all five countries. Italy had the highest figure at the end of the period, while the UK experienced the most significant increase.

In 2000, Germany had the highest percentage, at approximately 33%, followed by Italy and France at 26% and 25% respectively. Germany’s figure increased gradually to around 37% in 2012. Similarly, Italy rose from 26% to 39%, becoming the country with the highest proportion of female parliament members.

By contrast, the UK started with the lowest percentage, at only 3% in 2000. However, it experienced a considerable rise, reaching approximately 28% in 2012. Belgium also saw an increase from 17% to 28% in 2004, before remaining relatively stable towards the end of the period. France fluctuated during the period, reaching about 32% in 2012.

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The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and highlighting key trends, such as the overall increase and the notable rise in the UK. It makes relevant comparisons between countries and includes specific data points. Minor inaccuracies (e.g., UK's 2012 figure and Belgium's 2004 value) and a slight omission of France's fluctuation details are present, but these do not detract significantly from the overall clarity and coherence. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and consider adding a brief mention of France's peak in 2004 for completeness.

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The report is exceptionally well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively highlights the main trends. The body paragraphs are logically divided, with a clear focus on countries with similar patterns, and the use of cohesive devices is natural and unobtrusive. Paragraphing is skillfully managed, and the progression of ideas is seamless.

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The vocabulary used is precise, varied, and appropriate for the task. There is a wide range of lexical items (e.g., 'illustrates', 'experienced the most significant increase', 'considerable rise', 'remained relatively stable', 'fluctuated') that demonstrate natural and sophisticated control. The report avoids repetition and uses synonyms effectively, showing full flexibility in lexical choice.

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The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Sentences are varied in structure, and the use of tenses is accurate and appropriate. Punctuation and grammar are correct throughout, with no noticeable errors. The writing is fluent and precise, meeting the highest standards of grammatical accuracy.

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