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Band 4+: Question The line graph below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries between 2000 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph titled 'The percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 - 2012)'. For Germany, the percentages were approximately 33% in 2000, 34% in 2004, 35% in 2008, and 36.5% in 2012. Italy's figures were 26% (2000), 31% (2004), 33% (2008), and 39% (2012). France's data points were 25% (2000), 37% (2004), 30% (2008), and 31.5% (2012). The UK had percentages of 3.5% (2000), 9% (2004), 16% (2008), and 26% (2012). For Belgium, the values were 17% (2000), 28% (2004), 29% (2008), and 28% (2012).

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The line graph compares the per proportion of women female members of parliament in European nations namely Germany, Italy, France etc. Belgium during the period from 2000 to 2012.

Overall, it is seen there was a considerable rise in the percentage of female members in parliament in all five countries. During the period from 2000 to 2012, the proportion of Belgium witnessed a significant increase, although it still the lowest in most of time.

In 2000, German reached the highest in a comparison with other at 36%, next to Yalia with 27%. In the other hand, the proportion of Germany was went up from 36% in 2000 to 36% in 200[?]. Similarly, Yalia also saw a steadily increase from 27% to 39% and became the nation which has the highest proportion at the fine end of period.

This UK also went with the lowest point, at 3%, but this number increased was bounced at 28% in 2012.

In the other hand, France and Belgium were recorded the a rising trend during the time frame given. France witnessed a remarkable increase from 25% to 37% at 2009, before fall down at 29% in 2008. After that, this number recovered to 31% in 2012. Belgium rised from 17% to 29% in 2000, before decrease 1% at 2012.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

proportion: 4

belgium: 4

france: 3

during: 3

increase: 3

other: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by attempting to describe the trends for all five countries. However, there are several issues that impact the overall quality. There are frequent inaccuracies in data reporting (e.g., stating Germany stayed at 36% or misidentifying the lowest country), and there are significant grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the proportion of Belgium witnessed', 'Yalia', 'the fine end of period') that occasionally make the meaning difficult to follow. To improve, focus on accuracy in data transcription, ensure consistent spelling of country names, and work on sentence structure to ensure clarity and grammatical correctness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is repetitive (e.g., using 'In the other hand' multiple times) and sometimes used incorrectly. To improve, focus on using a variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Conversely', 'Meanwhile') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular focus. The transition between sentences needs to be smoother to allow the reader to follow the trends without effort.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used inaccurately, which can lead to confusion. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'Yalia' instead of Italy, 'rised' instead of rose) and word choice issues (e.g., 'the fine end of period', 'the proportion of Belgium witnessed'). You should aim to use more precise academic verbs for describing trends, such as 'fluctuated', 'surged', 'declined', or 'plateaued'. Additionally, ensure that country names are spelled correctly throughout the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'the proportion of Germany was went up', 'this number increased was bounced'). Many sentences are fragmented or contain redundant words. I recommend practicing basic sentence structures and focusing on the correct use of past tense when describing historical data. Pay close attention to preposition usage (e.g., 'at 2009' should be 'in 2009') and article usage.

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