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Band 5+: Question: You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Sam,

Hello! I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you to apologize for my trip to you in Canada next week because my family are preparing for birthday ceremony and too much work need to be done so we need to postpone our meeting.Next week, my Father’s birthday will take place ,so that all of our family must participatein it to celebrate together. Because my mother is sick, I have to make most of the arrangement.

I am sorry that I could not preserve our scheduled visit. only if you was in the same city I would have come to you .What about rearranging the visit to the next month at which I will be free. I hope these suggestions help. If there is anything else I can do, just let me know. I hope I didn’t cause you too much trouble.

Sorry again!Best wishes,Ahmed

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task. The reason for the change is clearly explained, an apology is offered, and a new arrangement is suggested.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making the flow slightly choppy. Paragraphing could be improved.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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Band 5+: Question: You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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