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Band 5+: Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparasions where relevant

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The image shows industries as a percentage of Brazil's economy for 2009, 2019, and 2029; Finance: 2009, 30%; 2019, 35%; 2029, 40%; Food processing: 2009, 10%; 2019, 15%; 2029, 20%; Manufacturing: 2009, 20%; 2019, 15%; 2029, 10%; Tourism: 2009, 25%; 2019, 20%; 2029, 25%; Oil, coal and gas: 2009, 15%; 2019, 15%; 2029, 15%.

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The bar chart illustrates various sectors and the gain they made and will make for Brazil in years 2009, 2019 and 2029.

Overall finance has and will have the most portion among other industries for all years.

Declines and rises can be seen in the graph given. While finance’s percentage consistently increases over time, manufacturing falls dramatically and will keep sinking according to the predictions. Oil, coal and gas saw the most financially successful year in 2019 and will drop. Tourism just stands over 20% and will not have any grow.

Some parts of economy has not affected much. Food processing was nearly 10% in 2009 and climbed just over . And it is its highest portion in economy in last 10 years. On the other hand the industry, that will share the least place for economy in the future will be manufacturing, followed by Food processing. Finance will keep its place and rise over all industries.

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5.5

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B1 - Intermediate
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6.5

The report accurately summarizes the main features of the data and makes relevant comparisons. Minor inaccuracies in the description of trends do not detract significantly from the overall quality.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved in places. Some sentences lack a clear connection to the preceding ones. The grammar errors affect the overall flow and clarity.

Lexical Resource

A range of vocabulary is used, although some choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The language is generally accurate and appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a range of grammatical structures is attempted, there are numerous errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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