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The image shows industries as a percentage of Brazil's economy for 2009, 2019, and 2029; Finance: 2009, 30%; 2019, 35%; 2029, 40%; Food processing: 2009, 10%; 2019, 15%; 2029, 20%; Manufacturing: 2009, 20%; 2019, 15%; 2029, 10%; Tourism: 2009, 25%; 2019, 20%; 2029, 25%; Oil, coal and gas: 2009, 15%; 2019, 15%; 2029, 15%.

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The bar chart present the contribution of various indrustries to Brazil’s economy in 2009, 2019, and 2029 measured as a percentage.

Overall, finance present reached the highest point, just below is oil coal and gas. reach the lowest position is manufacturing.

In 2029 years, finance present reached the highest point in economy, around 42 percent, and also finance shows just below point in 2019 years, around 6 persent lower than 2029 years. Finance illistrated amazing reputation and every years signiticantly rise. By the way manufacturing present vise versa gradually fall every years. Economy oil, coal and gas shows absolutely did not change except in 2019, in general 2019 present amazing point exactly 35 persent.

Manufacturing reached the lowest point in economy to Brazil’s, precisely 5 persent. A little higher located food processing did not much of a difference around 5 present. Tourist present amazing competitiveness, but did not matter broked through to the top.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by summarizing the information about Brazil's economy. However, there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some irrelevant or unclear statements, which detract from the overall task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and ensuring clarity in your descriptions and comparisons. Also, pay attention to grammar and vocabulary to enhance the coherence of your report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different aspects of the data. To improve coherence, consider organizing the report by industry or by year, and use clear topic sentences to introduce each paragraph. Use cohesive devices such as transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice and imprecise language. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to economic trends and industry performance. Focus on using more precise language to describe the data and avoid vague or informal expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in punctuation. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly and paying attention to basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in grammar and punctuation.

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