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Band 5+: The column graph shows the percentage of males in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart comparing two categories, 'Watching' and 'Participating', across six sports, with a vertical axis from 0 to 50. The data points shown are: Football (Watching: 40, Participating: approx. 11), Rugby (Watching: approx. 28, Participating: 20), Basketball (Watching: approx. 36, Participating: 25), Badminton (Watching: approx. 27, Participating: 25), Fishing (Watching: approx. 13, Participating: 50), and Horse riding & racing (Watching: approx. 36, Participating: 20).

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The bar chart compares that the percentage of males, who prefer watching or participating sports in a country.

Overall, males prefer watching rather than participating all sports, except fishing which is the most popular activity in the chart. In the watching section, football dominated in the chart, meanwhile watch fishing is higher than participating football.

Higher differences in the beginning, football, basketball, fishing and horse riding. While watching football (40%) is four times higher than practising, Basketball remains 10% difference in favour of watching. Watching to fishing sports remains around 14%, while higher than half of males prefer participating. When it comes to horse riding, watching is nearly two times higher than participating.

Rugby, which is famous in USA illustrates around 27 % man prefer watch it, which is 7% higher than participating. Badminton illustrate a negligible difference, which 2% higher watching rather than participating.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

watching: 8

participating: 6

higher: 6

prefer: 4

fishing: 4

which: 4

chart: 3

males: 3

sports: 3

football: 3

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The report identifies some key features and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is somewhat clear, but the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, ensuring correct grammar and word choice, and providing a more comprehensive overview of the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related points. Transitions between sentences and ideas are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the main points, but there are instances of imprecise word choice and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Higher differences in the beginning' is not idiomatic. To improve, focus on using more precise and varied vocabulary related to comparisons and trends. Pay attention to collocations and idiomatic expressions to enhance the naturalness of your writing. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and impact clarity. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage are noticeable. For example, 'males prefer watching rather than participating all sports' contains errors. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully for errors. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures accurately.

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