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The image displays a line graph titled 'Number of shop closures and openings 2011–2018', with a y-axis ranging from 0 to 9,000. The data for 'Closures' is as follows: 2011: approximately 6,400; 2012: approximately 5,900; 2013: approximately 7,200; 2014: approximately 6,500; 2015: approximately 700; 2016: approximately 5,200; 2017: approximately 5,100; 2018: approximately 5,200. The data for 'Openings' is: 2011: 8,500; 2012: approximately 3,900; 2013: approximately 5,100; 2014: approximately 6,200; 2015: 4,000; 2016: 4,000; 2017: approximately 4,200; 2018: 3,000.

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The graph illustrates the number of the department store that founded and closed down in one country between 2011 and 2018.

First of all, there had been the significantly fluctuations in the number of opening businesses during 2011 to 2014 and enclosed store during 2014 to 2016. However, the graph demonstrates that It is still stable in 3 years later.

Now turning to the data, the amount of opened shop considerably plummeted from 8,500 to 4,000 in one year, but it gradually climbed by 1,000 each year until 2014. The vertex directional changing of business house closures that was downward trend was in 2014. They were closed more than 6,000 stores in one years. Still, it skyrocket approximately 5,100 to 5,200 the next year.

In conclusion, the graph had hurriedly fluctuated in many years. There is a bunch of business that had variation for 3 years, commencing from 2011. moreover, the variety of opening department store had irregularly changed from 2014 to 2016. Next 2 set alarm.year, the graph is nearly the same.

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The report attempts to address the task, but there are issues with clarity and accuracy. The language used is not always precise, and there are some grammatical errors. The description of the data is not always clear or accurate. To improve, focus on using more precise language, ensuring grammatical accuracy, and providing a clearer and more accurate description of the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always easy to follow. Paragraphing could be improved to group related ideas together more effectively. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, hindering the overall coherence. For example, the shift from the second to the third paragraph is not smooth. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'However') would help to link ideas and improve the logical progression of the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('founded' instead of 'opened,' 'enclosed store,' 'vertex directional changing'). There is a reliance on basic vocabulary, and more precise and varied language would enhance the report. For instance, instead of 'plummeted,' consider using 'decreased sharply' or 'declined significantly.' Expanding your range of vocabulary and using synonyms can make the report more engaging and accurate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect article usage ('the significantly fluctuations'), awkward phrasing ('It is still stable in 3 years later'), and subject-verb agreement issues ('They were closed more than 6,000 stores in one years'). Sentence structure is often simple, and more complex sentence constructions could be used to express ideas more effectively. Careful proofreading and attention to grammatical rules are needed to improve accuracy.

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