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Band 5+: summarize the graph which shows imprisonment in 5 countries between 1930 and 1980

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The image contains a bar chart showing imprisonment figures for five countries in six different years. For 1930, the figures were: Great Britain 30, Australia 70, New Zealand 100, United States 120, and Canada 100. In 1940, the figures were: Great Britain 55, Australia 40, New Zealand 130, United States 110, and Canada 125. For the year 1950, the values were: Great Britain 40, Australia 45, New Zealand 50, United States 115, and Canada 105. In 1960, the data showed: Great Britain 60, Australia 65, New Zealand 60, United States 117, and Canada 100. For 1970, the figures were: Great Britain 68, Australia 68, New Zealand 85, United States 95, and Canada 65. Finally, in 1980, the values were: Great Britain 85, Australia 88, New Zealand 90, United States 135, and Canada 90.
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The table below highlights the figures for imprisonment in five different countries of Europe from 1930 to 1980.

Firstly, the table shows the imprisionment has increased frequently in Great Britian. In the case of Australia, it is both rising and falling in every ten years. In New Zealand, imprisionment was in control upto 1950 AD, But after that it again started to increase. Nowadays, United States have the most imprisionment than other countries . Canada has decreased the imprisionment in 1980 with the comparision of 1930.

Moreover,In 1930 New Zealand and United States has equal percent of imprisionment . Same case happened in 1970 but with three countries , Great Britian,Australia and New Zealand.

Overall, The table shows the number of imprisionment of different countries properly. It is shown that in the present days United States has highest number of the imprisionment and Australia has the lowest number of imprisionment .

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
imprisionment: 8
countries: 4
table: 3
united: 3
states: 3
number: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data to support the general trends described. To improve, include more specific data points and ensure accuracy in representing the information from the graph. Also, focus on comparing and contrasting the trends across different countries more explicitly.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, transition words like 'However,' 'In contrast,' or 'Similarly' could improve the flow. Consider grouping countries with similar trends together to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable,' 'peaked') and comparisons (e.g., 'significantly higher,' 'slightly lower'). Avoid using informal language such as 'Nowadays.' Also, the report refers to a 'table' instead of a 'bar chart'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('imprisionment has increased'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('with the comparision of 1930'). Sentence structure is also quite simple. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your writing. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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