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Band 6+: Task 1 table about the rates of temporary migrant workers in 4 countries.

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The image shows a table detailing temporary migrant workers in four countries for the years 2003 and 2006, alongside the number of these workers per 1,000 people in 2006: Australia had 152,000 workers in 2003, 219,000 in 2006, with 10.7 per 1,000 people in 2006; New Zealand had 65,000 workers in 2003, 87,000 in 2006, with 21.1 per 1,000 people in 2006; United Kingdom had 137,000 workers in 2003, 266,000 in 2006, with 4.4 per 1,000 people in 2006; United States had 577,000 workers in 2003, 678,000 in 2006, with 2.3 per 1,000 people in 2006.

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The table gives information about the number of people who migrated and worked temporarily in four countries namely Australia, New Zealand, the United Kingdom and United States in 2003 and 2006 and per 1000 migrants in 2006.

Overall, the most number of migrant workers were in the United States while the least number of people were in New Zealand.

The highest number of transient workers were recorded at 577,000 and 678,000 in the United States while the lowest number of foreign workers at 65,000 and 87,000 lived in New Zealand in both years respectively. In contrast, the number of workers per 1000 people were the highest in New Zealand and the lowest were in the United States in 2006.

Furthermore, guest workers were doubled in the United Kingdom between the time period 2003 and 2006 while the numbers increased almost the same at 100,000 in Australia and the United States. On the other hand, the number of transient workers increased slightly from 65,000 to 87,000 in New Zealand. In comparison, workers per 1000 people were nearly twice as high at 21.1 in New Zealand as that of Australia at 10.7 while the values were 4.4 in the United Kingdom and at 2.3 in the United States.

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

united: 9

number: 7

workers: 7

states: 6

zealand: 5

people: 4

while: 4

australia: 3

kingdom: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the requirements of the task, providing a clear overview and highlighting key trends and comparisons. The data is presented accurately according to the visual description, and the comparison between the total number of workers and the rate per 1,000 people is well-handled. To improve, ensure that the overview is more comprehensive by mentioning the general upward trend in all countries, rather than just identifying the highest and lowest values. Additionally, some phrasing could be more precise to avoid slight ambiguity in comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from an overview to specific details. However, the progression of ideas could be smoother. Some cohesive devices are used, but the transitions between comparing total numbers and the 'per 1000' metric feel a bit abrupt. To improve, try to group information more effectively - for example, by grouping countries with similar trends together rather than jumping between different types of data points within the same paragraph.

Lexical Resource

You have made a good attempt to vary your vocabulary by using synonyms such as 'transient workers', 'guest workers', and 'foreign workers'. This prevents the report from becoming repetitive. To reach a higher band, aim for even more sophisticated collocations and ensure that the synonyms used are always contextually perfect. For instance, 'guest workers' often implies a specific legal status, so ensure it fits the general context of 'temporary migrants'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that hinder the flow. For example, 'the most number of' should be 'the highest number of', and 'the numbers increased almost the same at 100,000' is phrased awkwardly. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and preposition usage (e.g., 'the lowest number... at 65,000... lived in New Zealand'). Focus on refining your sentence construction, particularly when describing changes and comparisons, to ensure clarity and precision.

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