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Band 5+: • Task 1: The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing Australian parents' involvement in children's activities in 2013: Dressing- Both: 6%, Father: 2%, Mother: 75%; Homework- Both: 38%, Father: 10%, Mother: 50%; Playing games- Both: 56%, Father: 5%, Mother: 70%; Preparing for beds- Both: 11%, Father: 10%, Mother: 50%.

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The bar chart compares the proportion of time Australian parents helped their children with dressing, homework, playing games, preparing for beds in 2013. Overall, the role of both parents was least in all activities, while the percentage of mothers were the highest in homework, fathers were more active in playing games with their kids. Moreover, both mothers and fathers helping percentages in preparing for beds accounted nearly the same.

In 2013, parents showed the lowest percentages in all given activities below than 0%. Additionally, women allocated more helping in dressing with 70% and 60% in homework, while men were 60% in the former and 80% in the latter activities.

In playing games, the highest proportion was the 70%, which was made by fathers and mother’s helping was 30%. Furthermore, assisting with making beds was about 48% in mothers and 50% in fathers.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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fathers: 4

parents: 3

homework: 3

playing: 3

games: 3

mothers: 3

helping: 3

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The main points are identified and addressed. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved. There are some issues with paragraphing and logical sequencing of information.

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Band 5+: • Task 1: The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

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• Task 1: The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

• Task 1: The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

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