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Band 7+: Task 1: The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents three maps dated 1800, 1900, and 2000. The 1800 map shows the River Stour surrounded by four land areas: Farmland (crops), Woodland, Brindell, and Farmland (animals). The 1900 map shows the River Stour with Farmland (crops), Woodland, and Brindell; the Farmland (animals) area has been replaced by Bun Hill, labeled "Village for workers," and an Industry area with 4 buildings. The 2000 map shows the River Stour with Farmland (crops), a smaller Woodland, Brindell, Bun Hill ("Village for workers"), an expanded Industry area with 8 buildings, and a new area labeled "Bun Hill park" adjacent to the Woodland.

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The three given maps illustrate the advancement of Brindell between 1800 and 2000.

Overall, when people started living in Brindell, there were more and more space for workers, serving their recreational and productive purposes

In the 19th century, the two kinds of farmland, located in the northwest and southeast of the map, were for crops and animals, respectively. The woodland was situated next to the farmland for crops, and it was also opposite Brindell across the river Stour.

In the next two centuries, Brindell remained at the same corner as it used to be, and the land of this town expanded over time. While the farmland for crops was fixed in the top left corner for the period from 1800 to 2000, its share for animals was replaced by the Bun Hill village for the town’s workers and four industries in 1900. At this time, the woodland was enlarged, creating more space for the construction of the Bun Hill park in the next 10 years. This was when the number of industries in the town doubled from four to eight.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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brindell: 4

farmland: 3

crops: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the maps and making relevant comparisons. The organization is clear, with an overview and body paragraphs describing changes over time. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the woodland actually decreased in size, not enlarged. To improve, ensure all details are accurate and that all significant changes are mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a generally clear structure, with an introduction, body paragraphs describing changes, and an attempt at an overview. However, the overview is quite general and could be more specific to the changes observed in Brindell. The progression of ideas within paragraphs is mostly logical, but some connections could be strengthened with more explicit linking words or phrases. For example, when discussing the changes from 1900 to 2000, using phrases like 'Subsequently' or 'Following this development' could improve the flow. Paragraphing is adequate, but consider grouping information more thematically to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the changes in the maps. Terms like 'advancement,' 'situated,' 'expanded,' and 'replaced' are used appropriately. However, there's room to enhance the lexical resource by incorporating more precise and varied vocabulary related to urban development and land use. For instance, instead of 'more and more space,' consider using terms like 'increased accommodation' or 'growing residential area.' Also, explore synonyms for words like 'fixed' and 'enlarged' to showcase a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a mix of simple and complex sentences. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not significantly impede understanding. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and precise tense usage. For example, in the sentence 'when people started living in Brindell, there were more and more space for workers,' consider rephrasing it for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, ensure consistent use of tenses when describing changes over time.

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Band 7+: Task 1: The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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